Final StoryBoard

This is my final story board. I tried to post this last night but for some reason blogger wasn't letting me post images. Did anyone else have problems?

















The story is fine but I definitely think that there are improvements to be made to this final story board. Particularly in the last act. I'm thinking that it shouldn't all be shown in one take with a pan.
These other little errors should hopefully become apparent when I start my animatic.